Sunday, August 9, 2009

How nice, would it be


How nice, would it be.
To travel, to see, to feel.
My own dreams, my own self.
If I could be the one,
to live the change,
How nice, would it be.

For if I expected
less, and gave more.
For if I loved,
and forgot,
How nice, would it be.

If i trailed my path,
traced it back, and
relived it.
How nice, would it be.

© Rajat Mahajan. 2009

7 comments:

The CarRioN's HasH said...

how nice it is
to find words,
in a pattern,
which defines music,
which explains the thoughts.

ecstatic shimmeR said...

Well, certainly a stamped carrion comment, the one I expected and wished.
Thanks!!

taresh said...

yeah it would be nice.. seeing things as we want them.. but things don't go our way..
well written.. :)

Adheesh said...

hw nice would it b 2 soar high !!
find oneself in cmplete solitude n peace whethr it b d past or sm near future 2 lively live d change!!
commendable wrk
:)

ecstatic shimmeR said...

@taresh
Thanks a lot buddy, finally i got you to comment. ;)

@Adheesh
Quite certainly, many things are not as we want them to be, it would really be nice if they flow our ways.
Thanks. :)

neo said...

well! this is the one which really touched me....the romanticism reflects here too.
yeah we always crave for the better future and hope for something better ....I really liked it

ecstatic shimmeR said...

@neo
Thanks man. One thing I have now realized for sure-the best expressions come out as a flash of an instant.
And a review like yours makes that instant a habit.