for the love of words
it is paradise indeed,my friend, the earth is in need;its losing its graceto the human's pacethat disfigured her faceearth is asking for a solace.
@carrionYeah, you reflected the other face of the coin very well. The earth surely needs us to wake up from this age long slumber.
good work indeed!!!
@MayankWell, i guess since this post, my life been filled with a lot of 'indeed'... ;)
Hi Rajat,Amazing how you managed to tie all of these natural elements together so smoothly. The stanzas feel like waves, where the second last one is the largest wave; then harmony is restored with last one.
@JennyWell, you opened my eyes to my own work.. I never noticed or thought about the larger wave idea, but thanks to you, I'll now be able to use something like this more often with an initial thought going into it. :)
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